Yeah. That’s me. I’ve earned the title.
Part if it is just style, and I’m working on making that better. Part of it is wanting to get the information about what happens during time lapses on the page. And part of it? Well part of it is writing longer works and needing the info there so the readers know what the hell is going on.
It’s a work in progress. There’s no doubt about that. There were times that I didn’t even realize that’s what I was doing. But now that I’m really and truly aware that it’s a problem I have, I know I can fix it. I’ve gotten some great tools and suggestions in the last few days that can help me tackle the issue and correct it.
It’s harder to go back and fix it in stuff that’s already on the page. But I’m working on it. It’s easier to write something new when I have that thought clearly in my head. This weekend I started something new, made a conscious effort, and even I can tell it’s better. Not quite there yet, but getting there.
I want to tell the best story I can, so I’m trying to improve with every word that goes on the page.